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When love is broken
By brook_rivers
14 May 2006

When one whole splits,
Into two lonely halves
 

When dreams are shattered,
And replaced by nightmares
 

When your soul is taken,
Violently wrenched away
 

When your heart is stolen,
Never to be recovered
 

When the future is impossible,
The past now worthless
 

When love is broken
What do you do then?
 

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Poignant
Written by Bagheera (683 comments posted) 14th May 2006
Sad, but beautiful. 
 
"There are more questions than answers" 
(can't remember who sang that :sigh
 
I'd like to think that anyone in the position you describe would be encouraged to try and find an answer ....
Very moving
Written by Eren (5 comments posted) 16th May 2006
Hi Brook_rivers 
 
I found this poem very moving, it's clear you put your heart and soul into it. 
I've been reading through your work and couldn't help noticing you're going through a tough time lately. I hope you'll find things ease with time. 
 
Best wishes, 
Eren

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