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| By julieroberts | ||||||
| 14 May 2006 | ||||||
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mdhi there, first attempt at allowing others to read my poems, i like to write about 'real life' experiences. i get inspired to get my emotions down on paper, and usually feel so much better once i have 'let it all out' let me know what you think. i welcome constructive critics you say i can't be happy... you say you always try.... you say i'm always crying... yet you never wonder why? you used to talk so sweetly you made me feel you cared your voice was soft you arms were strong when you whispered 'don't be scared' we walked lifes path together united hand in hand we tackled lifes bad weather united we would stand I don't know when it happened? never noticed when it changed when we ceased to walk together and we turned down seperate lanes we still face lifes bad weather yet we 'do it' on our own we hav'nt got a hand to hold we face things all alone you say this makes me toughen up and its best for me this way? you can't do any more for me accept this life you say? you ask me why i'm crying in an 'irritated' voice.... 'tut' 'tut' you say get on with it you really have no choice well let me tell you 'honey' theres a reason for my tears i mourn the loss of the man i loved he chased away my fears I admit defeat in some ways I know he's gone for good i buried him today.. as deep in my heart as i could I'm not keen on his replacement he's really not my type! a man who's full of arrogance who always thinks he's right I will not take your choices or accept what you think i might i will follow MY heart MY hopes My dreams and look for mr right.
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