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Poetry
Lonely
By scrump999
15 May 2006
I dont write poetry very often but i'm pleased with this, reading it back reminds me how far i've come and that everything will be alright.




I am Lonely

With the darkness closing in

A desolate cloak surrounding me

I am shrinking deep within



I am lonely

Drained and tired from the fight

Not a ounce of passion left in me

I just want to close my eyes



I felt lonely

When you walked out of my life

You took my heart and soul with you

I felt as if I’d died



I felt lonely

Trying to make it through each day

It was easier to stay in bed

Where my fears were kept at bay



I’m not lonely

Now I’m able to move on

I found the strength inside of me

Being me has made me strong



I’m not lonely

Even when I think of you

My life is there ahead of me

To myself I’m staying true



I wont be lonely anymore

I have myself to love

One day when I am ready

I’ll be sent an angel from above

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Written by brook_rivers (484 comments posted) 16th May 2006
This was an excellent poem! I can see why you are pleased with it.  
It was very heartfelt and moving.  
Will look out for more of your work 
 
Brook x 
Grin!!!
Written by scrump999 (8 comments posted) 16th May 2006
Thanks Brook, i was a bit nervous about posting it but you've made me smile!!!!  
x :grin

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