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| By no1butClo | ||
| 16 May 2006 | ||
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I think this is fairly weak as a piece, and it may need major adjustment. But I think that some things go full circle, and this frame of mind does too... You seem so perfect, Gorgeous and talented, Why would you want me, When you could have anyone? This little dysfunctional wreck Of a child, who just wanted to be The difference, once upon a time. Now I'm here swapping glances in the dark, Feeling every atom of mine relative to yours. Your smiles aren't quite As secret as I'd like, So I'm waiting for a sign, Something to tell me when, 'Cause I feel like I'm fifteen again, And I don't have a clue.
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