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Question Mark
By Crayfish
17 May 2006
A question mark is a coily thing,

That makes a sentence weak and thin,

It throws the words up in the air,

And leaves the speaker standing there,

Wide-eyed, trembling, cold and bare.

A question mark looks better in pencil,

Sounds like a rising scale,

Tastes like … a whistle?

Can be a treacherous hook,

Sharp and pointy with a sinister look,

Or could be made of a malleable wire,

Passive or even red-hot with fire,

Or a question mark can look more like an arrow,

A path to the answer, more straight than narrow,

Than if we had avoided it,

Because of its shape, its feel, its grit.

A question mark makes you think,

It makes you stop, pause, swallow, and blink,

A question mark is more than the digestion,

That statement was in the form of a question.

Reviews

Written by no1butClo (337 comments posted) 25th May 2006
this is such a fun piece to read, and really cleverly written!  
 
The flow is good, but it loses heart towards the end somewhat. I think the last few lines could be replaced by something more thoughtful...or just taken away.  
 
I got confused after "A question mark is the very beginning..." maybe have a look at those lines again? 
 
I like this alot, keep goin! 
 
x clo x 

Written by kitlovesmolly (3 comments posted) 30th July 2006
This has got such a lovely rhythm to it. 
 
Got to say i like the "question mark is jut the beginning" bit because conversationally it often is the start of a big debate as well as being the indicator of the end of a point. 
 
I also like the imagery of a hook, as tht is indeed what a question amrk appears like. 
 
For me, reading it, I think iI would have preferrred stanzas because of the number of questions and points you make about question marks. For me it would have provided more structure as a reader and a clearer jumping off point from each observation. 
 
But I like it. 
 
Two thumbs up for y'all. 
 
Molly x

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