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| The Trinket Owl | |
| By shirley_keeldar | ||||
| 17 May 2006 | ||||
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This is a poem written for an exercise in which each member of the class was given an object to write about. Mine was a little owl ornament that was surprisingly heavy when I picked it up and I got the sense that it had once been important to someone. (The first version shown here is the amended version, the second the original) My tiny little owl is heavier Than he looks, more weighty. He is smaller than my thumb but Worth more than any gold ring. He is a freakish creature whose Head can turn all the way round. His animal eyes never close as He perches on the end of my finger. Soaring high above whenever he wants, My owl sleeps in the day and Goes out at night without me. In his cat-like way He watches me, renders me Helpless with his stare Unblinking and unfathomable; My most loved pet. I found him in a junk shop jumble, Fell in love with his giant owl eyes. I took him home and nestled him Precious in the palm of my hand. ...................................................... My tiny little owl is heavier Than he looks, more weighty. He is smaller than my thumb but Worth more than any gold ring. He is a majestic but freakish creature, His head can turn all the way round And his huge eyes always searching, Perching on the end of my finger Or soaring high above, if he wants to. Nocturnal, my owl sleeps in the day and Goes out at night without me. In his cat-like way He watches me, takes me in With his stare, unblinking, and Cat - like, I never quite know Just what he is thinking. I found him in a junk shop jumble Beseeching me with his giant owl eyes. I took him home and nestled him Precious, in the palm of my hand.
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