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Three Couples
By no1butClo
18 May 2006
Three couples, three countries, three languages, same ol' story...ain't love a funny thing? Sounds rubbish in English but we need love to y'kno...

my french is a lil shaky, so any ammendments welcome...blame Luis for faulty spanish :P

Inspired by a real event, and a comment..."the hottest kiss ever would be making up, after an argument, in the rain..." graci, laurena :P

Un dispute sous la pluit.
Il tient la fille dans la rue.
Ell pleurs, et il tient son corps
pres d'il.
Il s'adore,
Ell s'adore,
tout le monde est d'accord pour ils.
Mais ca, c'est un petit reve.
Est-ce qu'il venirai pour
moi?



An argument in the rain.
He holds the girl in the street.
She cries, and he holds her body
close to him.
He loves her,
She loves him,
Everything is right with the
world for them.
But this, it's just a little dream.
Will it ever come for me?



Un querella bajo la lluvia.
El sujeta a la nina en la calle
Ella llora, y mantiene su
suerpo cerca de el.
El la ama,
Ella lo ama,
El mundo esto correcto.
Pero eso, es un pequeno sueno.
Algun dia lo tendre yo?

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