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By BrianRobertNeal
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20 May 2006 |
I know it's a poem and not a script nor a tale but it's a tribute to the posters on this forum. Humour is a full life's centring sun, Round which eccentric planets rotate. Drawn in by the gravity of fun, Basking in the warmth that it creates. |
Written by woody44 (777 comments posted) 20th May 2006 | very succinct Brian. Apart from a couple of pieces I did for a writing workshop I have never really `got into` poetry.Perhaps I should have a go.
| Thanks Woody
Written by BrianRobertNeal (1195 comments posted) 20th May 2006 | I don't write much poetry that's not humorous or spoof/parody. But of my serious pieces this is my favourite.
Thanks for your time and comments.
Brian. |
Written by Bottleblondesurfer (3449 comments posted) 20th May 2006 | Wow you make it sound really rather wonderful. I thought I was trying to be funny to block out the black dog of depression and incipient pschosis but actually I think I prefer your rationale after all. Well done that man and on behalf of all the aspiring humourists here, thanks. A nice gesture.
cheers
BBS | Thanks BBS
Written by BrianRobertNeal (1195 comments posted) 20th May 2006 | For your time and comments.
I must confess that I'm very pleased with this peice, particularly the line
Drawn in by the gravity of fun,
which must contain my subtlest of puns.
Brian. |
Written by Bottleblondesurfer (3449 comments posted) 20th May 2006 | Yes I was going to comment on that line. I mean you must be serious about comedy or it won't be funny.
As you say a clever and telling line | Thanks again BBS
Written by BrianRobertNeal (1195 comments posted) 20th May 2006 | Would you like a special edition of Octopus, if so PM your E-Mail address, like I promised Woody, I wont stalk you, honest,
Brian. |
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