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The Great Writers Website entry
By Bottleblondesurfer
22 May 2006
I don't usually do competitons but this sounded fun and was mecrcifully short
So here is my 96 words on the subject


…..so finally the workers snapped and attacked their slave driver of a boss, kicking and punching him savagely. Then Jane, the ringleader opened the window and the others dragged him over……

“Right everybody I’m afraid the caseloads are piling up and leave has been cancelled this month. Hey, Jane what’s that on your screen? You’re on a warning about using the internet get back to work”

Jane hurriedly saved her story and decided not to post it on the Great Writing Site until she could put it in the non-fiction forum. The thought really cheered her up.

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Hi BBS
Written by cynicsid (177 comments posted) 22nd May 2006
Thanks for your entry, about which I cannot comment without bringing my impartiality into question. 
 
Siddie.

Written by Witzl (1585 comments posted) 9th December 2006
I just found this awaiting my review . . . 
 
Once again, you have made me laugh. Last month I quit my job for wanting to do precisely what you have described in your fantasy. Which would have felt great, I am sure, though quitting felt pretty good, too.

Written by Fledermaus (3160 comments posted) 4th January 2008
Heheh... Good one :)

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