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Nothing Proven
By Tenchi
23 May 2006
Hmm fracured, rambling, unstructured stream of consiousness.

Nothing Proven


So you want to take me on? With my baggage and woes?
Still you fancy your chances.
Luck, my friend is not on your side

You’re flighty and beautiful
But are you inside?
OK I know you taste nice
Your scent excites me
I know you look like a dumbed down version of everything I’ve ever wanted?
Can I afford to get hurt again?
I think not
But it’s got to be better than this
Prozac helps
But not as much as you

Commitment, hey I’m committed (or I should be)
Excitement, you’ll find none of that here (a local shop for local people)
I just want affection, but you don’t even cuddle
I want the lottery win and the big house
Then again, don’t we all

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