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By Tenchi
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23 May 2006 |
Short and Sweet It never suited ya
The shape, the sounds, the smells abound
The taste, the touch, I like so much
You know the things I’ve left unsaid
The warmth of you inside in my bed
These are what I like and miss
When you’re not here it take’s the piss.
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Written by Bottleblondesurfer (3331 comments posted) 24th May 2006 | Hi there ,I haven't seen your name before so either you're new here or I am.
Anyway as you say it was short and sweet, If,as they say, less is more this was definitely more
I really liked that last line if fact I read it again and it still made me smile.
A really clever little piece.
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