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Poetry
Flak Vest
By Tenchi
23 May 2006

Flak Vest


Your smile makes you bullet proof
But it won’t stop the lies
Born in shadows and untruths
It will not cease your cries

Your crimes they prove you guilty
Punishment is coming
I’d do it but you’ve slain me
With the poison of your cunning

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wow
Written by no1butClo (337 comments posted) 14th July 2006
i love this little bitter piece, nicely imaginitive 
 
good stuff :) 
 
x clo x

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