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Hands
By MessiahDave
25 May 2006
Only worth reading if you're familiar with both H.P. Lovecraft and bad, bad movies. If you are, though, enjoy!  

            Michael Warren grumbled angrily to himself as darkness tinted the ocean air. He and his family had been driving for what felt like hours, trying to find the seaside lodge they'd rented for the weekend within the maze of hills and twisting road that was New Innsmouth, Oregon. Now his daughter was whining the last of his and his wife's patience away, and their dog Peppy was yapping away their will to live. Occasionally, Michael would entertain himself with the idea of rolling down the window, holding Peppy out at arm's length, and seeing how narrow a tunnel he could find.
            "Michael, look, there's a car up ahead. Why don't you stop and ask them for directions to the lodge?" His wife asked.
            "Margaret, we don't need to ask for directions. I have a very solid idea of how to pretend to know where I'm going." He answered. Michael usually had no problem with asking for directions, but the look of the approaching car unnerved him. It was old and unspeakably rusty, and its headlights had a slight greenish tinge. The headlights were cracked slightly as well, scattering the light they cast into a frightening, fragmented sheet of sinister twists.
            "Mommy, why does daddy have to act so stupid all the time?" His daughter, Debbie, asked with that special brattiness that children only ever seem to manage when they have a legitimate reason to have beef with their parents.
            "Your father doesn't act stupid all the time, sweetie. Only on vacation. He doesn't quite know what to do when we have them, since they're so few and far between." She said that last sentence with an admonishment that made Michael feel more shame than anger. A fertilizer salesman, he'd never had the money to afford any luxury for his family before. Now that he did, he was ruining it and she wasn't afraid to let him know it. Michael sighed heavily, and his shame overruled his fear.
            "Fine, fine, I'll ask." He said. "Sorry." He managed to force out, before stopping the car and getting out to walk over to the more sinister one they'd just nearly driven past. He approached, and as he did he felt a strange, tingly nauseous sensation that ran from his toes all the way up to his head.
            "Excuse me!" He called, banging on the window. Inside, he saw a young couple sitting. They both had pale skin and dark hair, and they had dampness about them. Not only was their skin clammy and shiny, but their clothes seemed slightly wet and when they rolled down the window the air that came out was inexplicably humid.
            When they rolled the window down, they didn't actually answer or make any indication that they'd noticed Michael. He wondered what on earth two young people could be up to alone in a parked car at night, and realized there was no indication of the only thing he could think of actually being done. Somehow, this worried him. "I was wondering if you could direct me to Manos Lodges?" He asked. He realized that they were staring blankly ahead at a jar of something on the dashboard.
        The boy held out a hand expectantly, still staring straight ahead. Michael handed him a piece of paper and a pen from his pocket, and the boy drew a crude map with directions. Michael accepted the paper (which was now, for some reason, wet and flimsy), thanked the couple, and promptly overstayed his welcome by asking "So what's that you're looking at?"
        The couple finally looked at him, turning their heads and moving as one, and they sneered. Their teeth were horrible looking and yellow, and little strands of spittle ran between their lips. Michael suddenly realized that he probably shouldn't have asked, though the couple sated his curiosity anyway. The boy took the jar up and handed it to Michael. Michael peered in, and saw dozens of tiny, floating round specks.

        "It's caviar." The boy said in an eerie monotone. Michael had always pictured caviar as being something people better than him liked to eat, though this stuff smelled more like something he'd find living in Peppy's droppings preceding a visit to a very confused vet. Trying not to seem disgusted, Michael handed the "caviar" back to the boy, climbed into his own car, and took the directions he'd been given.

        The Warrens arrived at Manos Lodges, though the plural was less of a hyperbole and more of an outright lie. Michael supposed a case could be made for counting the outhouse with the tent pitched next to it a lodge, but he didn't buy it. The view of the ocean as they approached the Lodge"s" was quite nice, with the huge ocean looming ahead of them. It stretched out, making up the entire horizon, almost like it was swallowing the world around them.
           "Well, it looks like Daddy finally found the place, hmm Debbie?"
          "Took him long enough." She said snippily. "Can I play with Peppy down by the water?"
        "Only for a moment, you father has to get the key for the lodge."
        Debbie and Peppy ran down to frolic in the water, and Debbie's parents walked up to the lone cabin. Michael got ready to knock on the lone door, before it swung open to reveal a man.
        "Yesssss?" The man said. His voice was high-pitched and nasal, and his skin had the same colour as the couple Michael had seen earlier. He had a curly brown goatee, though it was sickly and falling away in patches. Perplexingly wide knees bulged from beneath the fabric of his brown pants, which went with his brown coat and hat. Margaret let out a scream.
        "Margaret, get yourself together! What is it, what's wrong?"
        "His feet! His feet!" She shrieked, pointing down at them. "For a second I saw a... I saw something horrible! Just for a moment but it crawled up into his leg and... oh God!" Margaret bent over and began to be sick. There didn't seem to be anything wrong with the man's feet, though his shoes were wet.
        "I'm sorry about this, sir. I'll be with you in a moment."
        "Hm." The man said indifferently.
        "C'mon, Marge, it was just your imagination. You've had a long day, you're tired. Sir, we're here to rent the lodge, do you think she could at least come inside for a second, maybe get something to drink?"
        "Yes, I suppose." The man said, letting them in. Michael sat Margaret down on the couch, and after she had a moment to catch her breath she told him she was fine.
        "Are you sure?" Michael asked. "That was quite the spell."
            "Yes, yes I'm fine. I must just be tired like you said, that's all."
            "Alright." With that, Michael turned to the man. "Sorry about all that, let me introduce myself. I'm Michael." Michael offered a hand, though the man didn't take it.
            "I'm Torgo." He said. "I watch the house while the master is away."
            "The master?" Michael asked.
            "Yes. He owns the house. That's him, on the mantle." Michael looked over, and saw a large painting of an imposing Arabic man. His eye was more drawn to the small, bas-relief statue beneath it, however. It was a tiny statue carved out of some sort of reddish, fossilized wood. It seemed to depict a horrible, winged creature combining the features of man, dragon and squid. Looking away from the statue, Michael looked back at the painting, only to turn back to Torgo when its piercing gaze became too much.
            "He's very... Very impressive, isn't he?" Michael said.
            "I think he's horrible. Absolutely wretched." Margaret said miserably. "I don't like the look of that picture, I don't like it at all."
            "Where is the master?" Michael asked, trying to cover up his wife's potentially explosive honesty. Truth be told, some dark, hitherto unknown part of him didn't agree with her assessment anyway...
            "He's dead." Torgo said. "Though not dead in the way that you or I know it, but in a different way. Dead, but dreaming." Almost like an exclamation mark, the tortured screams of Peppy rang out after Torgo's ominous statement.
            "Oh my God, Debbie!" Margaret cried, rushing outside to see what was wrong. Michael and Torgo followed.
            Debbie stood on the edge of the shore, up to her calves in water. The water around her was bubbling, not with the froth of the ocean but as if it was agitated and boiling. It mingled with blood that dripped from Peppy as he hung, horribly mutilated with his skin completely ripped clean from his body and his organs dangling from his skeleton in Debbie's mutated hands.
            Where Debbie had once had the sweet, soft hands and arms of a young girl, she instead had a mass of spindly, sharp black things that glistened with blood and mucous. They writhed like tentacles or lobster's legs and were covered in tiny bristles. They clicked about, twirling and twisting Peppy's flesh and cracking and popping Peppy's bones into complex geometric patterns as Debbie's parents looked on in horror. Her face wasn't slack and uncaring like the faces of the other people of New Innsmouth, but instead gnarled in a truly alien expression of emotion unknowable to man.
            "That's the uncanniest thing I've ever seen." Michael said dumbly, speaking too soon. For then, whatever dark force it was that was making the water bubble and that had turned Debbie into whatever she was now made her mutate again. Her form popped and exploded in growth, wings the size of battleships burst from her back and countless thick cephalopodian tentacles sprouted from her mouth in a disgusting, writhing maw. Michael felt a sickening sensation as he recognized the creature from the statue.
            "Master! The master has returned!" Torgo yelled ecstatically. "I'm coming to join you master!" He yelled, running up to what was once Debbie. Down from the hills the rest of the people of New Innsmouth ran down as well. Michael stood, frozen in horror, as he saw the couple he met earlier followed by a procession of creatures of varying degrees of humanity. They all chanted, a thousand ancient and twisted tongues becoming one upon the words "Ia Ia Cthulhu Ftaghn".
            "No, it's horrible! Horrible! No!" Margaret screamed, clinging to Michael, and sobbing on his shoulder. Michael looked down at his wife, and then up at his daughter as she devoured her approaching followers. Their chanting rang in his ears, and the dark part of him that he felt disagree with her earlier came bubbling back. He heard her sobs, but as he listened to the chanting of the townspeople, he heard it less and less. Michael turned to Margaret, and looked her in her moist eyes. He felt something about him changing, and not just inside of him. As her sobbing eyes filled with horror, his feeling that the change was not purely spiritual was confirmed.
            "...Cthulhu ftaghn!" He chanted along in a new, slimy tongue. It was one he was not used to, but he could adapt. The transformational quality of the town could make him adapt to anything. What-Was-Once-Debbie was happy, and so was he. Michael's wife tried to run away, and so he had to take care of her...

             The door swung open. Two robust, healthy looking people stood in the doorway.
            "Uh, hello! We're here to talk about renting the lodge?" One, a blonde yuppie man said.

            "I'm Michael. I watch the house while master is away."

Reviews
Review Of 'Hands'
Written by Vulture (13 comments posted) 18th October 2007
Messiah Dave  
 
Overall I enjoyed the story, which read well. My only gripe if you can call it that, is the fathers reaction to his childrens' multilation.  
 
"That's the uncanniest thing I've ever seen." Michael said dumbly, speaking too soon. 
 
 
I think you need to rework this, which IMHO completely lacks credibility and fails to convey the utter horror he would feel as parent. (I say that as one myself).  
 
Cheers 
 
Ian 
 
 
null"That's the uncanniest thing I've ever seen." Michael said dumbly, speaking too soon.

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