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Street Photographer
By patterjack
26 May 2006
Street Photographer

Focus , zoom in and freeze the shot .

This old woman you have chosen will be featured,
perhaps world over , in some glossy magazine
though nobody will ever know her name.
With the sly use of your covert lens
You can select like any Fate--
Clotho , Lachesis , or Nemesis
to bring her to another birth , to weave a pattern ,
and , should you wish it , cut the tenuous thread
that ties her to the world around yourself and us.

Metal and glass now stand between you and her
and soon in the laboratory there will stand still more
when you , with subtle use of light and shade
will show the chiaroscuro of her life ,
highlighting the traces of the strengths and weaknesses
and the events that have shaped her being

Is it to you in some ways disappointing
that you are only a second stage creator ?
A modern Pygmalion relying on the gods
to have brought to life your subject
before you add your minor man made change ?

But be reassured -- the impact of her living
is passed through you to us , and we are grateful.

Reviews

Written by brook_rivers (484 comments posted) 26th May 2006
Loved this poem!! Especailly the last two lines which were powerful. I liked the way you were exploring a photograph from the point of its creation and comparing this to being a god.  
I also liked the first line as it set the poem up well and was quite a memorable line I think.  
great read!

Written by Psimple (30 comments posted) 30th May 2006
thankyou. 
The power, perceived or real, that lies in the hands of the one holding the camera...intersting. 
 
I also love the mix of the modern technology (lab) and the old school hands on photo taking process. (choosing the subject and what to highlight.) 
 
Loved it. 
Fantastic mythological references!
Written by amsford (17 comments posted) 24th July 2008
I like that the photographic creation of the woman both is and is not her... that a photograph out of context (and aren't they all out of context?) sometimes tells more about the photographer than the subject. 
 
I also like the image of the photographer envying God for the "true" act of creation... 
 
Subtle, yet incredibly engaging.

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