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Haiku a-go-go
By employee2-4601
26 May 2006
Wrote this some time ago. Wierdreamer asked if anyone used Haiku's, well here's the answer...

The tiny white dance,
The wind whips them through the sky,
A blanket of white

The brilliant moon,
Shining through the broken clouds,
Silver over white

The frozen water,
Cracking with the slightest step,
A thin crystal net

Birds fly above clouds,
Black shadows on the white land,
No food to be found.

Sun fighting the clouds,
A grey wall up in the sky,
The final defence

The sun breaking through,
The white land ceases to be,
A vision destroyed

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Written by Weirdreamer (17 comments posted) 26th May 2006
I'll leave the business of writing odes to those who have the talent. :upset
Nice
Written by Tigermoons (5 comments posted) 26th May 2006
I enjoyed this poem, I quite liked the line 'A thin crystal net'. I found it nice :)

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