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Diminishing poem
By patterjack
30 May 2006
Not my usual discursive style . There are reasons

Diminishing Poem

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Quite diminished
Written by Josie (2823 comments posted) 30th May 2006
I think your "poem" is very funny. I hope it was meant to be. And it will give some hope to those who are struggling to find words - like me sometimes. The fact that it made me laugh achieved something - and I suppose that as poets we should stir up emotions. I finish up with the following poem: 
 
Have 
 

 
good 
 
day! 
 

 

 
.  
 
gone

Written by oxy (28 comments posted) 30th May 2006
For making me laugh ........... 
 

 
 

 
 

 
 
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