This is kinda like a part two of another poem but I only want to post this one at this time and, again, it's a deeper issue and I tried to be as vague as possible in both because I have no clue who's reading this so...no offense! There's kinda a hidden metaphor in it and I'd be very surprised and interested if anyone can find it. Once you get the metaphor, then, in my opinion, the poem is seen in a different light but then again, I'm the author and I know what I'm actually talking about in the poem so maybe I'm wrong...