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By brook_rivers
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02 June 2006 |
I was trying out new techniques for poetry. I came up with word associated. I firstly thought of words related to each other : edge- sharp - knife and put them down the left side of the column and then write a sentence about each and put it all together! what do you think?! can i call it poetry?! Edge of reason
Sharp side of your mind
Knife positioned for...
Tomato sliced and diced
Red rose blooming
Lipstick smudges
Kiss me quick
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What a cool method!
Written by mishmish (389 comments posted) 1st June 2006 | Love it! This is what I call a 'good experiment'. It definitely works. I've found in the past, associative words have an inner resonance that is not even obvious on the conscious level, but somehow link together to make something interesting and often intriguing.
More examples of the experiment - Please!
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Written by jean.day (2266 comments posted) 1st June 2006 | | I think it makes for good poetry and enjoyed reading it. Do some more. |
Written by brook_rivers (484 comments posted) 2nd June 2006 | Thanks for your replys. I have another one like this whic i will post up shortly. I think i will do a bit more work on this one and weave in a few more lines!
thanks for your support
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