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| The Kill | |
| By bloodange77 | ||||
| 02 June 2006 | ||||
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Short story into well umm. . . i haven't been reviewed in a while but i haven't written anything in a while either. I have found the one though. He is perfect. This story is based on true love and sacrifice. So please read this. It actually the end of the story. I was silent, silent as he walked toward me with a smile on his face. A smile that spoke of pure evil. It was a menice to my life. The life which I was supposed to spend with Leo.William was the jealous vampire, the guy who wanted me for his own. He was the one I used to think I knew. The only reason why he is so jealous is that I rejected him and then telling him I wasn't going to date anyone. Then Leo came along and guess what? Well here's a hint. . . I broke my own rule about the dating. Hey. . . you can't blame a girl for trying can you? Now I was to die because I didn't love the jealous son-of-a-bitch. Leo was a vampire, also. I am just thankful that he decided to love me of all the people he could have chosen. Me and I don't even belong with his type. His type are evil and he met me and knew that I was the one for him. How ironic is that? "Now tell me again, and tell me truthfully, why you rejected me?" he asked. "Umm. . . will you let me live if I do?" I asked doubtfully. "Maybe no. . . maybe yes, I guess you'll have to tell me to find out. And don't give me that crap about not dating again," he whispered in my right ear. "Then I think I will take my time," I back-sassed him. "Hmmm hmmt hmm, you make me laugh," he laughed softly. "Please just let me go? I beg you William, please," I began to fake cry. "Hee hehehe eh, no. I am not letting you get away," he said and then went into one of those creepy bad-guy monologues," you see one day he will think of you and then he will think he was too late." He may as well have been talking to himself because I wasn't listening. A rock would have been a better audience. But he kept gabbing and yakking his gum. I noticed an open window not far from where I was. It hadn't been open before. The shadows behind William began to move towards us as he went on and on with his boring monologue. I saw a glint of purple, bright purple. My love, Leo! He's come to save me. As he got closer I thought about how he was always there for me keeping me safe from harm. My love for him made me smile. That broke William's boring monologue and he was suddenly silent. "Hey are you even listening to me?" he asked. "Yeah, sure, hehehe not really. I am bored and I know what you're saying. I don't have to listen to know what you are talking about. Now are you done ranting?" I hissed. "No my dear I'm not. And you will listen to the rest of it. . . or you shall die now. Hahahah," he began to laugh. "Shut up," I said," you know that is what is wrong with you. You never shut up! You're like a cheerleader. That is pretty bad man. Do you ever get tired of gabbing like that?" I growled at him. That shocked him, his silence was a reprieve from his annoying nazzally voice. He began to twitch. It didn't last long though. He didn't end his silence with a gasp either. "You know. . . you could learn a good lesson in prudent silence. I know how to shut you up though," he walked up to me and bent down in my face," you know what I'm going to do?" "Do I care?" I asked. "Yes because you might not live through it. . . hmmt now what do you think I will do to you today?" he asked. "Nothing immportant. . . now if you don't mind I would like to die now so I don't have to hear your insesent voice. It annoys me sooo. . . " I said. "You are not the nicest little bitch on the earth now are you?" he hissed. "Hence the word bitch, you dult. . . now go away and leave me to die of boredom from your little speach," I said. "How insulent can you get?" he asked this time highly amused. "Go suck a pig," I spit in his face. The amusement faded from his putrid face. It was replaced by a scowl. I smiled and straightened my back up laughing at him now. He slapped me across the face. I turned away from him and sat there looking away from him. A tear slipped down my cheek. "What's the matter? Does she not like it when people hit her?" he mocked my tears. "You son-of-a-bitch," I hissed and glared at him. I saw him shiver. This was a good sign. He was starting to see my hatred for him and now it was affecting him. I hissed at him and he jumped back. Then he slapped me again. "Well well well. . . are you scared of little old me?" I whispered. "No! Why would I be affraid of you?" he yelled. "I don't know you tell me. . . maybe cause you know if I wasn't bound I would-" he didn't let me finish. "No you wouldn't," he said. "You didn't let me finish. . . I wasn't going to say kick your ass. No. . . I was going to say. . . reject you again. . . but if you want to replace that with kick your ass you can cause I would probably do that too," I said leaving no room for mercy. "Shut up, you fucking bitch," he yelled. "Hate me cause I am so beautiful, but don't hate me cause I hate you with all my heart, mind, body, and soul. Now leave me alone you selfish pig bastard," I yelled back. He exhaled and sat there wide eyed staring at me," You would say that to me?" "Yes I would you little shit. God I hate you soo much you don't even know the half of it," I growled. He ran toward me and stop right infront of my face. I looked away and saw my beloved ten feet away from us and I smiled at him. I knew now he would watch me die even though he had saved me from never loving anyone in my entire life. William kissed my cheek and I spit at him again. He just couldn't get through his thick skull. . . I wasn't interested. He then bit into my neck. I felt the blood start to drain from my body. "I'm sorry. . . Leo. . . I love you. . . " I whispered as everything started to go blurry. "NOOO!" I heard Leo yell. "Leo, I had a feeling you would come. . . but you know what it is too late for her now cause the only way to save her is too make her one of us but you know you wouldn't do that to her. Not to Dawn," William said. I heard alot of clatter. My eyes were closed but I could tell who was winning. A voice came in my ear a minute later. It was Leo, I knew he would win, he did too. My love for him is what shall let me die in peace, peace and love and harmony with my heart wide open. "Would you want to live with me forever?" he asked. "I love you, of course I would," I said. "Then just say the words, please and I love you," he said. "Please and. . . I. . . " I couldn't concintrate on his words and the words I needed to say. I blacked out. I knew I hadn't died cause I still felt the pain. Still heard his voice. Still heard the birds and the ocean. Still heard the leaves rustle in the wind. The leaves. . . my eyes snapped open. Leo was still beside me like the night before when we woke up. He was still sleeping like the night before the horror. I leaned over to him and kissed him on the lips. "Hello my dear," he whispered. "Hello, my love," I whispered back," can I ask you something, Leo?" "Ask away, Dawny," he whispered his little pet name for me soothing me automatically. "Can I tell you a dream I had. . . it was horrible. . . " I whispered. "Sure anything you want, angel," he said. "Well. . . " I told him then of the horrible dilema," and then I woke up." "There is only one problem. . . " he said. "What?" I asked. "It wasn't a dream," he whispered.
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