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By brook_rivers
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02 June 2006 |
In the same style as the experiment previously posted! Tree of life
Leaves of happiness
Green of truth
Grass of grace
Field of love
Country of patriotism
World of the unknown
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Good lab work!
Written by mishmish (389 comments posted) 2nd June 2006 | Another great example, brook.
Love the 'World of the unknown', seems to indicate beyond the boundaries of a country lies something else...
This experiment is certainly producing some great results.
best wishes
mishmish | Very Clever
Written by alastair79 (47 comments posted) 2nd June 2006 | Have to say, don’t think this should actually work, but it does and it makes you read it several times. First to enjoy the poem as a poem and second to see the relationships of the word to the one below it.
Very clever. Nice work.
Alastair. | Hybrid?
Written by Bottleblondesurfer (3590 comments posted) 2nd June 2006 | I usually like poems to rhyme and scan but I must say I did like this. I think you may have created a new hybrid genre, somewhere between prose and poem, they seem on the face of it simple and straightforward but I have a sneaky suspicion that they are not,there's more there than at first reading,like they are more than the sum of their parts
| less is as ever more
Written by Leo (573 comments posted) 2nd June 2006 | Clever writing: very simple but enigmatic...
Leo |
Written by brook_rivers (486 comments posted) 2nd June 2006 | Thank you glad you liked it will see if i can come up with some more!!
brook x |
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