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By mishmish
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02 June 2006 |
This is a little ode to the dream and maintaining the strength to achieve it. This could be the big one Always saying... Always praying... Persistence, never fraying Then One day It was. |
Written by brook_rivers (484 comments posted) 2nd June 2006 | I am intrigued by the last sentence. I think most people could identify with this in one way or another.
Great posts for a newbie keep it up  | Thanks brook
Written by mishmish (389 comments posted) 2nd June 2006 | This was written as an encouragement, a sign that eventually but one strives for will eventual come.
Thanks for your kind comments. I'll try to keep it up...
best wishes
mishmish | balance..
Written by isobel* (26 comments posted) 3rd September 2006 | a nice balance, wonderfully to the point.
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Written by wewerethere1 (17 comments posted) 24th January 2008 | | I like it. Sums up what dream is in a poetic form thanks for sharing |
Written by rachel1983 (12 comments posted) 12th March 2008 | I like it. it is both gripping and interesting.
The last line left me guessing. Wonderful Writing.
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