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spurofthemoment
By Tenchi
03 June 2006
Jesus Christ if you hadn't noticed
I got drunk and had to post this
There's millions of us
We're not unique
silence our voice
but not our critique

We're necking prescriptions
but raging inside
at the sense of injustice
that no-one can hide

just do something please
save us we cry
we're on spiritual knees
and inside we shy

away from the real 
many escapes we try
and rather than feel
our lives just fly by


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Written by brook_rivers (484 comments posted) 3rd June 2006
great poem! why dont you enter it in siddie's competition on the forums?

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