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| Drowning | |
| By brook_rivers | ||||||||||
| 03 June 2006 | ||||||||||
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I look all around me The sea of unknown With me in the middle All alone I am aware of many hands Stretched towards me But however much I try I can’t grasp them There is a blur of faces I can’t see clearly The sickly feeling of Ice sliding down my back I gasp for air I fight the inevitable Desperate to draw breath To feel alive again I can feel the bitter, salty water Washing over my body Stinging my deep wounds And slapping me in the face I know what’s happening And I can’t seem stop it There is nothing to hold onto To prevent it I am drowning
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