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By Pho3ny
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06 June 2006 |
Random work from me and a friend. Thats the mood we are in.
They lay together side by side, From under the tongue, They bend and hide, One goes first the other follows in stride. They travel over glass, They feel no shards. Where would one be without the other SOLE. |
Written by brook_rivers (486 comments posted) 6th June 2006 | Loved this play on words!
well done
brook  | Good try
Written by Josie (2849 comments posted) 6th June 2006 | | Good try. The word "Soal" threw me. Was it meant to mislead the reader? | neat piece
Written by Leo (573 comments posted) 6th June 2006 | 
tres bon! | Thanks
Written by Pho3ny (4 comments posted) 6th June 2006 | Yeah this was meant to mislead.....
Me and a friend got really bored. |
Written by mishmish (389 comments posted) 6th June 2006 | This quite fascinating...
I keep reading it, and reading more into it.
Amazing what random thoughts create.
Well done
mishmish |
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