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In Rain Clouds, with Cataracts
By streetcarp
07 June 2006


The skies tears

Linger in your eyes

As old rain falls

On your time

With every drop that lies

 
Your heart regrets

A Stagnant slide

Boroughed today

Below wherever

It now subsides

 
It's cold out in you

You know it remains…


These sodden lungs

Frozen out veins

Clouding in Eyes

Lay forever

With the clouding rains

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