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By laya08
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07 June 2006 |
... Can you feel the place that once existed in your mind? Touch it, I dare you. Think back, you cannot feel it , you cannot explain it. However, you know its there. The place that you created in your dreams The place that you heard your own screams Of course not Lost in a matter of seconds Evaporated in to the air we breathe Becoming thoughts of things we shall remember As if it was placed onto a wall, in a frame, in a picture But then again We ask for more For it to return But life throws it away Lets our memories burn Where is it? We have no idea; we just know it's gone. Why can't we remember, Please, Llets go back to retrace Taking it in,We embrace Saying what we think and express it in passion Listening and taking in deep concentration We try to get it back , but yet we fall back to sleep Knowing its there ,just waiting for us to see Laying still and still with no sound We just receive We finally get it back, But only within the things We imagine and believe. |
A beautiful piece Written by mishmish (389 comments posted) 7th June 2006 | Hi Lay08 This is beautiful. It speaks of the power of dreams, and how we often want to return to that place, a place where anything can happen. But life crashes in and the dreams are lost. I enjoyed this poem very much. Well done best wishes mishmish
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