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| Doing things right | |
| By laya08 | ||||||||
| 07 June 2006 | ||||||||
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As my time spent as my dreams die, I fall to the floor still with no cry But being brave is not what matters Being strong doesn’t even apply I wonder if life will go on If my breath just says goodbye In moments I ask myself what did I do wrong what did I do right Can my problem be solved or is life a black light Therefore, I prayed to my god I asked for forgiveness I begged on my knees asked for life to freeze Can I start over Can I relive my life I didn’t mean for this to happen I am sorry, I didnt realize I just turned Just covered my eyes So in the end I know I’m punished Punished with life I truly am sorry I cannot seem to do things right.
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