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A.S.B.E --- A warning for the future
By netkwake
10 June 2006
This was actually in progress before the recent “violence” discussions but it seems apt to produce it now anyway.


The juke box was annoying but at least it meant it was unlikely that their conversation could be overheard. “So we’re all agreed then” Jez enquired of his colleagues. Dave and Rob nodded affirmatively and all eyes then turned onto Andy who was still to answer.

“ok” said Andy with seeming reluctance.

“You need to be absolutely sure Andy” said Jez

“ok, I’m in” said Andy with a hint of annoyance at having his dedication called into question.

“ok” said Jez, “This is how we have to do it then”.

The discussions in the Kings Head continued for another hour and the details were finalised. Tonight would be the night.

The four left the pub at 9:45pm and drove to the lock-up which had been prepared by Jez in the hope of securing the agreement of his three friends, they fought their way into the black nylon full boiler suits which Jez had procured and donned the black gloves obtained from the same source.

The equipment was loaded into the back of the once scrap vehicle which had now acquired a new engine and a new identity, “the chavmobile” as Jez called it. The headgear was passed around but not mounted in place, they were to drive to the location and complete their preparations “on site”.

They reached the infamous Calder Estate and headed for Romsea Drive which they knew was where their target could generally be located, the first pass of Romsea Drive revealed little and the tension in the car began to rise.

“Where are the little bastards” said Andy, his eyes going backwards and forwards from window to window searching for sign of life, “where are they”. They turned right at the end of Romsea Drive and took rights at the next two corners to put them back on Romsea again and then they spotted their quarry.

Coming from one of the gates along the road were a group of five or six youths, at the head of the line was Ross Henry, a fifteen year old known to the police and just about everyone within a five mile radius, he was accompanied by Duane Sharp, Darrel Speak, the others couldn’t be identified.

“Lets do it” shouted Andy, his voice pitched higher than normal, his adrenalin obviously taking him to new heights. Rob stared straight ahead and contemplated what was about to happen, his fists clenching and unclenching on the wheel in anticipation.

“Cool down Andy” said Jez, “We will pass by them, go around the corner and get the gear out of the boot, put the balaclavas on and come round again”.

“We do it just as we planned, Rob, stay in the car and keep the engine running, Andy, me and Dave will go in with the bats” The others nodded in agreement. “Remember” said Jez, “Its that Henry bastard we want, the others are just a bonus”.
They went around the corner, stopped the car, armed themselves from the boot and once inside again, donned their headgear. The car started up again and went around the corners to begin the approach.

As the car entered Romsea drive, the group of youths could be seen about twenty metres in front, they drove about 5 metres past them and stopped, the doors were flung open and the three black clad figures emerged and began swinging the baseball bats against the heads or any available part of the remaining group of youths, the ones who hadn’t managed to flee at first sight of their attackers.

Darrel Speak lay on the floor unmoving following the receipt a blow to the head, Duane Sharp lay on the floor screaming with his leg underneath him jutting out at an impossible angle, Ross Henry was on his knees with blood pouring from a facial wound above his eyes pleading not to be hit again. One other youth was crawling away from the scene and the remainder were running back down Romsea Street shouting for help.

Jez threw down the baseball bat and approached Ross Henry, he grabbed Henry’s right hand, Andy pulled his other arm behind his back and used his other arm to get Henry into a headlock.

Jez pulled the tin snips from his pocket, extended Henry’s index finger and placed it between the jaws, “Like nicking cars do ya? ya thieving little bastard”. Henry’s eyes widened in terror and Andy’s grip tightened around his throat to prevent the inevitable screams.

“Think it fun to wreck someone’s stuff do ya?” shouted Jez “Well have a good laugh about this then”. Jez flexed his arm and applied full power the tin snips which sheared through the finger with incredible ease and the dismembered digit dropped to the floor, the thumb and ring finger followed.

The procedure was repeated with the other hand and Henry’s chilling screams were allowed to flow.

“Have a few days off” shouted Jez and aimed a final fist into Henry’s face.

Doors began to open from the surrounding houses, Rob was revving the engine and screaming at the others to hurry, the three ran back to the car and jumped in, Rob pulled away before Andy was back in and he shouted for him to wait while he closed his door. Rob screeched around the top corner narrowly missing another car and then headed at speed back to the lockup.

Jez was laughing and talking about what had just happened, “won’t be nicking any cars now will he?” he ripped off his balaclava and turned to each his friends in turn, Rob was concentrating on driving but nodded in agreement, Dave had removed his balaclava and was mimicking the action of the tin snips, a wide smile on his face.

Andy stared straight ahead and said nothing.

They cut the lights as they turned into the estate and approached the lock up, Dave got out and raised the door, Rob drove the car in and switched off the engine. They left the vehicle and began to remove the boiler-suits. The discussed what had transpired but Andy continually stared straight ahead and wouldn’t make eye contact with any of the others.

“Whats up Andy” said Dave, “Its over now, we did it”.

Andy turned to look at Dave, “We shouldn’t have done it”.

All of the others turned to face Andy, Jez walked forward and stood in front of Andy, he put his hand on his shoulder, “He deserved it Andy” said Jez quietly, “He has had enough warnings from the police and everyone but he just kept hurting people, we stopped him Andy, he won’t hurt anyone now”.

Andy looked at Jez “I know all of that but it’s so… so… Christ I can’t get it out of my head, the look on his face as you cut off his fingers”

Jez grabbed him firmly by both shoulders, “I know its not pleasant…. but he deserved it, we did what the police couldn’t do, we put him out of business.”

Andy freed himself from Jez’s grip and nodded in affirmation, the four opened the prepared bottle of Scotch and had a drink together before making the phone call.

Jez dialled the number on the specially acquired mobile and a sleepy female voice answered after around three rings, “Jodie Miller” she said.

Jez began to read from the piece of paper in his hand.

“Jodie Miller, please listen carefully, I know you are the crime correspondent from the Post and we will only talk to you. We have just done something which you will hear about shortly, we are the A.S.B.E, The Anti-social Behaviour Enforcers. Our code word is “Cobra”, if anyone phones you and doesn’t give the code word then it is not us, we will contact you whenever we have completed an action so that you know it was us that carried it out.

We are dedicated to ridding this city of the scum which is responsible for any act of theft, violence against innocents or anti-social behaviour in any form, these acts will be punishable by a range of means at our disposal and ultimately death if deemed warranted.

Don’t try to trace the phone in future because they will be destroyed or disposed of after each call. Our database currently contains over 400 targets and we will not stop until they are stopped.

These actions have been made necessary by our ineffective police force, our ineffective judicial system and a degeneration of traditional values of decency and respect. Our message to the perpetrators of anti-social acts is simple, when they stop, we stop. Until then, they can expect no mercy, message ends.”

And so it began…………

Reviews
Listen closely
Written by BrianRobertNeal (1195 comments posted) 10th June 2006
And you will hear the sound of the road to Hell being paved with good intention. 
 
In the end the victims strike back, the Pendulum swings from liberal Anarchy, to absolute repreassion. 
 
At some time when moving to the left or moving bacj to the right, the Pendulum must have passed the optimum position. 
 
If only we could have stopped it there. 
 
Another well thought out and paced, piece of wrok, 
 
Brian.
Sadistically superb!
Written by mishmish (389 comments posted) 10th June 2006
Hi NK 
 
This was an excellent piece of writing. Really got me going... 
 
One little thing, maybe one of the characters should have remembered one of the more heinous crimes that Ross Henry had perpetrated, just to give a solid context on why such actions were necessary. 
 
But that a minor point...A really superb, deeply disturbing piece. 
 
Well done 
 
Best wishes 
 
mishmish
Great!
Written by Leo (573 comments posted) 10th June 2006
I think you captured something here that will have resonance with many people.  
 
We all see little 'scum bags' who wreak havoc locally , and then walk the streets of our neighbourhoods with impunity. 
 
The desire for retiribution is a very human one, but as Brian pointed out, we should resist succumbing to. 
 
Really enjoyed this piece! 
 
Leo 
 
(Cell commander A.S.B.E.,London East)
Ground Hog Day...
Written by gerardconnolly (1186 comments posted) 10th June 2006
I have only just got round to reading your piece, but I am glad I did since I thought it very well written although expressing a sentiment with which I feel I have little sympathy. No matter. That does not effect how competently you produced this and how effective, in my opinion, it was in conveying that sentiment .And in both cases I thought you handled it with real skill. The last paragraph, the opening words of which bore an uncanny resemblence to Oswald Mosley's infamous Phillip's Park speech of so long ago, was of particularly poignant impact. 
 
Well done.
oh, sh.......... !!
Written by Bagheera (679 comments posted) 11th June 2006
....... but it had to happen sooner or later .... what d'you mean, this hasn't been posted in the "non-fiction" section?????????? :grin  
 
:eek It can only be a question of time before something similar actually occurs. Well written!
Thanks an' all that
Written by netkwake (26 comments posted) 11th June 2006
Just wanted to say thank you for taking the time to comment on this. 
 
There have been a few comments along the lines of having no sympathy with the actions of the A.S.B.E, naturally, descending to the level of the perpetrators of anti-social crime is probably not the solution to the problem but is increasingly likely to be seen by many as their only way of fighting back when the legal institutions put in place to protect them don't work. 
 
In this region, there is a town called Awsworth which is currently suffering from high levels of anti-social crime, much of it by young gangs who don't even live there. There was talk of vigilante gangs being formed to combat it, luckily, pleas from,local residents seem to have temporarily averted it in order to give the police a chance to tackle it.  
 
They MUST get results though or the scenario I have described in fiction could very well become reality, and soon. 
 
I am not saying I support these actions but they could well be upon us whether we support it or not. 
 
Thanks again for your comments, I have taken on board the points raised in relation to the background of Ross Henry and I beleive the story could have been enhanced by reference to it.  
 
Leo, the black boiler suits are available to hire from Moss Bros Anti Chav Dept. 
 
Balaclavas from Tommy Hillfigger Urban Gangsta Collection
Chilling stuff....
Written by SammoR (109 comments posted) 11th June 2006
 
..very well evoked. Not sure what effect you're aiming at, but this will probably raise feelings of horror and admiration in equal measures. I had a mate one who argued that as part of the Irish peace dividend, unemployed NI paramilitaries should be employed kneecapping mainland UK yobs. 
 
Is this piece to continue? I'd like to know what happens next... 
 

Written by Bottleblondesurfer (3136 comments posted) 11th June 2006
As you say a warning for the future. 
They say nature abhors a vacuum and the vacuum created by the absence of police will be filled by vigilantes whether right of wrong and it's not only the angry amateur who makes mistakes, the police only seem to shoot innocent people as well. A very well constructed and thought provoking piece, and lets hope it's just thought it provokes! 
BBS
sign of the times...
Written by woody44 (760 comments posted) 16th June 2006
Sadly true of many areas nowadays and very chillingly told N. My youngest daughter stopped going for nights out in Nottingham because of all the aggression she witnessed. I don`t agree that meeting violence with violence is a way forward, although i can see why some people might be driven to it. I think if the police adopted a `zero tolerence` attitude, as in New York, we would go some way to making our towns and cities safer places for all. 
 
Loved the writing...oh and my wife and I still shop in Nottingham...well you can`t turn a free tram ride down can you! 
 
happy writing... 
woody

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