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Tour de Force (Crazy Horse)
By raskolnikoff
12 June 2006
Can you guess that this is about sex?  It's very subtle...(!)


A hot love for you running through my veins,
A full blooded stallion without the reigns,
So fix the irons and grip the saddle,
Man the decks and start to paddle,
Burn my bushes when you light my gorse,
And ride me like your crazy horse
 
Tour de force, tour de force
You killed my heart without remorse
Tour de force, tour de force
You’re mineral water and I’ve found my source
Tour de force, tour de force
Give love to me like a crazy horse
 
Eyes glitter brightly in your equine face,
I ask for more but you set the pace,
And cracking the whip upon your rear,
In the final yards I start to steer,
And from behind we take the course,
A winning ride on a crazy horse.

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good ride
Written by Leo (573 comments posted) 12th June 2006
Great writing 
 
beware any woman with a saddle!

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