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Our World
By raskolnikoff
12 June 2006
I love nature

This is our world where the monkeys play
With a pack of lions then run away,
To the stream of life beneath the trees,
That the walrus shares with honey bees.
 
This is our world where the tigers roam,
Around the forests and then head home
To the habitat they share with wolves,
And watch the eagles play with doves
 
This is our world where we feed the possum
With peanuts picked from cherry blossom,
While watching the zebra frolic with voles,
As beavers share their lunch with moles.
 
This is our world where we stroke the whales,
In the mighty river below the dales,
Where we pat the dolphin and watch the seals
Feed on bears for their evening meals.

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Our World
Written by Buchan (42 comments posted) 15th June 2006
I enjoyed the content and flow of this poem..Indeed a poem about Nature. Very well expressed and written.Thank you for sharing .

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