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Spike
By raskolnikoff
12 June 2006
I loved Spike, he was a tan whippet.  It's only now that i realise what a good dog he was.  I miss him very much.

We used to take Spike to the beach to stretch his legs
And run on the damp sand while he teased the waves
Letting the salty water touch his paws
And running away when it splashed his chest.
As he got older we lifted him into the car
And wound down the window because he loved the air,
The sights and sounds, the smell of the country
And everything that passed him by.
On colder nights he lay by the gas fire
Sleeping and panting while his paws twitched
Dreaming about chasing the neighbours cat
Until the heat became too much and he trundled off
To find a cooler spot.
We scattered Spike’s ashes in a gusty breeze
Across the beach where he used to run,
And for the first time we drove home without our friend,
Without the window wound down.
And I cried when I saw his lead on the table,
Cried when I heard his bark
Because I lost my friend of many years,
I loved my good dog, Spike.

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Written by Bottleblondesurfer (3458 comments posted) 12th June 2006
When I lost my dog a few years ago I was too upset to write anything. I wish now I had put my feelings down. I was moved by this which I think was emotional without being sentimental. A heartfelt and open feeling of loss I think most can relate to. Not a wasted word. 
It's so sad the little buggers really do leave paw prints on your heart.

Written by emma777 (22 comments posted) 25th February 2008
yes this is actually lovely... i thought oh tosh, some crap about a dog when I opened it (sorry!) but it's beautifully written and honest, unsentimental.

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