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| By michaelangelo | ||||
| 14 June 2006 | ||||
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i'm not sure whether this is finished yet, but right now i thought i should post it. i might end up coming back and editing it. its quite a thinky poem, but hope you enjoy I open message number one So it can be erased I see the things you wrote, my eyes read on and on They’re now just empty words, much to my distaste The love I knew has since long gone I wish I were unfazed My heart explodes I shout and cry, I’ve done it it’s erased But oh my god what have I done? Please help me flee this painful maze I open message number two So it can be erased I see the things you wrote, my eyes read on and on They’re now just empty words, much to my distaste The love I knew has since long gone I wish I were unfazed My heart explodes I shout and cry, I’ve done it it’s erased But oh my god what have I done? Please help me flee this painful maze I open message number three So it can be erased I see the things you wrote, my eyes read on and on They’re now just empty words, much to my distaste The love I knew has since long gone I wish I were unfazed My heart explodes I shout and cry, I’ve done it it’s erased But oh my god what have I done? Please help me flee this painful maze I open message number four So it can be erased...
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