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| ETERNITY | |
| By writerpoet | ||||||
| 14 June 2006 | ||||||
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THIS IS A POEM ABOUT GROWING OLD ETERNITY I LOOK IN THE MIRROR WHAT DO I SEE OH MY DEAR I DON’T SEE ME MY EYES ARE BLEARY AND SLIGHTLY ODD MY HAIR IS STRINGY OH WHERE IS GOD I SMILE SO SLIGHTLY OH YES ITS ME I SEE MORE CLEARLY SUDDENLY I SEE A LOVELY SMILE SKIN LIKE DEW NOW I KNOW I HAVNT A CLUE AM I LOVELY A HEART OF GOLD WHY OH WHY AM I SUDDENLY COLD NOW IM SIXTEEN OH SO PRETTY THE YEARS HAVE GONE I NEED NO PITY MY BABE IN ARMS SMILES UP AT ME SHE LOVES ME SHE KNOWS ITS ME TWENTY FIVE AND STILL SO FINE THE YEARS GO BY AND MY CHILD IS MINE FORTY NOW AND LIFE IS GREAT MY KIDS HAVE FLOWN AND SO HAS MY MATE SIXTY TWO AND LOOKING GOOD LIGHTING THE FIRE CHOPPING THE WOOD SEVENTY NOW OH DEAR OH DEAR MY EYES CANNOT SEE SO CLEAR NOW IM OLD WHAT DO SEE SUDDENLY CLEARLY I SEE ME IV MET MY LOVE IN A CROWDED BAR AM I TO OLD OH NO SAYS HER SO DONT WORRY YOUR NEVER TO OLD TO FIND YOUR ETERNITY AND A LOVE SO BOLD
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