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By Buchan
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16 June 2006 |
Thoughts of life and it's implications. Shadows of the past Phantoms in my mind Trees like people fallen A woodland path in time Life weaves a crooked line For all is birth and sense Only love is sweet recompense. |
excellent!
Written by brook_rivers (484 comments posted) 16th June 2006 | I see 'time' has become quite atheme on the poetry section of late.
This was very poetic and conjured up tons of images. The last line was very powerfuol but my favourite was: 'A woodland path in time'.
Although a short poem there is a lot to think about here!
Welcome to the site!
Brook
| lots in a little space!
Written by Leo (573 comments posted) 16th June 2006 | You crammed loads of images into a tight little verse.
well done, i very much enjoyed it |
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