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Wheel of love sixth turning |
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By patterjack
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17 June 2006 |
Ending
Farewell
Now that we have been parted by
the first faint flicker of regret
we each shall find a reason to deny ,
a reason to forget.
From the simple filament of desire
I wove a cloak to cover the complex heart,
but now this love has lost its former fire
we two must part.
and yes, you will forget ,
but I will remember this:
that now to time we both shall owe a debt
unpaid , but for a half-remembered kiss. |
Written by brook_rivers (484 comments posted) 17th June 2006 | Beautifully written patterjack. Great writing! Brook | Stunning! Written by mishmish (389 comments posted) 19th June 2006 | Hi Patterjack This is absolutely stunning. I loved the verse: "From the simple filament of desire I wove a cloak to cover the complex heart, but now this love has lost its former fire we two must part." The filament suggesting the 'energy' that kick started the whole affair. It's beautiful imagery. A lovely poem! best wishes mishmish |
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