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| Taking in. | |
| By laya08 | ||||||||
| 18 June 2006 | ||||||||
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Moments you spend thinking Dreaming of success Taking in what you have done wrong Bringing out what needs to be done We say life is unfair We complain about what we need But truly we have what we want It’s all because of our greed. Money, cash, moolah we call wanting more and more but we never realize the fall The end point of if it all We forget we all are blessed Forgetting the whole purpose of living Just taking in what we think is right The way we want everything The way we see the light But we shall remember Good things never last forever Even our own dreams die Knowing that from the start But we still ask why We question the reason Wondering why we cant have it all But soon letting it go The whole meaning of no We have created a life of stress Turned our thoughts to mess We want to start over you ask? Can we give back? But yet you open your eyes Yet you still see the black.
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