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Woman You Are.
By Buchan
19 June 2006
A poem of love for women in all their glory. Brightening the day with all their feminine charms.


                            You are beautiful,picture as a new flower
                             Scent as a pink rose, around a green bush
                             Still as morning breath on a clear mirror
                             Eyes deep as morning sunglow at evening light

                             Hands as warm as soft,fireside,glow
                             Blushing cheeks,wet red ,bright lips
                             Shape of wonder,like fog on a calm sea
                             Happiness that fills my heart and soul

                             You are music when all sound is gone
                             In the night your light shines like the moon
                             You are my day when you enter my vision
                              A woman ,so simple,you comfort my life.
                     
                              

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Lovely to read
Written by Aurora (50 comments posted) 11th September 2007
This poem I think flows very well, i especially like the line 
"You are music when all sound is gone" 
I think that that is a very powerul line and no matter what your idea of music is everyone can relate to it. 
I love the use of the 'fireside glow' as that has great conatations 
of warmth. Overall a really nice poem.  
 
keep writing! 
 
Aurora 
 

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