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| The Narcissus | |
| By no1butClo | ||
| 19 June 2006 | ||
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This was inspired by a friend of mine who I have known for years, God bless him. Our families met up a few weeks ago and at one point he was sat in a corner in all the teenage splendor I am only too familiar with. I could not let the opportunity for some literary fun pass me by, so here's my effort. The form is a small tribute to the original epic by Ovid [Echo et Narcissus], which I have been obliged to study for the past two years, and am almost sorry be rid of. Thanks to shadowplay for the title. To Michael. Such lethargy can only come about via that roller-coaster of hormones which every human being must survive. He slumped in a corner, grumbling of injustice, inequality, and a headache. Anarchy trailed dark lines form his ears, snaking over his clothes into an oblivious back pocket. The head that rested back (most likely leaving a greasy signature on the wall behind) was crowed with curls, worthy of a different Bacchus, the smell the only memory of parties past, and marking trees as territory - discretely - on the stumbled route home. Clothes, uniform in their baggy tribute to a long lost era known as rock 'n' roll, hung from his over-used, under-slept, not-quite washed body, and his footwear? Threadbare, for all he really cared, which he didn't. Between matted locks and pale fingers his shadowed face made way for his (single) saving grace, those eyes. Shining darkly. maybe with passion, tears, mischief, awe or angst, perhaps love, not that he believes you'd understand. What he doesn't realise, is that they are how we see, through his adolesence, past his own self-centre, into the centre of himself.
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