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Love is forever.
By Buchan
20 June 2006
People pass away ,we are left with love and memories.

                          In the universe of time and space
                          Love and soul will stay in place
                          Flesh will die and pass away
                          Yesterdays happiness ,love today

                          Forever me,forever sweet you
                          Lovers together just we two
                          Soul lovers in time shall meet
                          Through music,love so sweet

                          Love an expression of the heart
                          You and I shall never part
                          Together in life our truth to see
                          As lovers, one ,will always be.

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Written by michaelangelo (13 comments posted) 21st June 2006
nicely rhymed, flows really well. 
i love the line ... "soul lovers in time shall meet" 
 
makes it a very optimistic and comforting piece of writing.  
 
thanks!

Written by mishmish (389 comments posted) 22nd June 2006
Lovely poetry, Buchan, beautiful imagery, with a deeply loving and romantic edge. 
 
well done! 
 
best wishes 
 
mishmish

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