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By Pho3ny
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22 June 2006 |
Jus a random play on how my life feels... awww bless me... What once was in pieces, Is still in pieces, What once was whole, Will never be whole, Delusions of a living, From living in this place. Delusions from hiding behind that soal, What does it mean, when the wall falls down? A new start for me, And the beings through which i crawl. |
darkness Written by Leo (573 comments posted) 22nd June 2006 | I think you captured a certain personal 'zeitgeist' very powerfully in this deliciously dark collection of words.. bless you...
| bless you... Written by no1butClo (337 comments posted) 9th May 2007 | In the name of Collins, Chambers and Oxford "soal"...? soul? What do you meeeaaaan...but I like the idea, well presented |
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