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Hole
By Pho3ny
22 June 2006
Jus a random play on how my life feels... awww bless me...

What once was in pieces,
Is still in pieces,
What once was whole,
Will never be whole,
Delusions of a living,
From living in this place.
Delusions from hiding behind that soal,
What does it mean, when the wall falls down?
A new start for me,
And the beings through which i crawl.

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darkness
Written by Leo (573 comments posted) 22nd June 2006
I think you captured a certain personal 'zeitgeist' very powerfully in this deliciously dark collection of words.. 
 
bless you... 
bless you...
Written by no1butClo (337 comments posted) 9th May 2007
In the name of Collins, Chambers and Oxford  
 
"soal"...? 
 
soul? What do you meeeaaaan...but I like the idea, well presented :)

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