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Love Like A Warm Wind
By Buchan
22 June 2006
Love comes and perhaps goes It is always remembered.  The mortal body passes but love goes on for ever(In the Spiritual sense)

                 Your love comes like a warm soft wind
                 Traveling around my body,breeze of delight
                  Holding each moment,values more than gold

                 I cannot see the wind,I can feel your loving soul
                 Warmth of beauty mingled with my delights
                 Divine ripple,the swaying trees,joins in our love
                  You are gentle as light cotton on my neck.

                  Moments will pass as the warm wind departs in sadness
                  Memories larger than the mountains outside our windows
                  Happiness a waterfall of pleasure bathing my heart
                  The moment is you,the clock has stopped,I am yours.

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Written by Clifftown (620 comments posted) 22nd June 2006
"The moment is you, the clock has stopped, I am yours." 
 
Beautiful.
Fabulous!
Written by mishmish (389 comments posted) 26th June 2006
I've just come across this, Buchan and it moved me...really, moved me. The sense of time stopping when you look at your loved one, the feeling that you and your loved one are all that exists in this universe we inhabit is just beautiful. 
 
You've captured the sense of love and the fact that love is absolutely timeless. The sense that love itself is bigger than reality can express...It's just fantastic! 
 
Well done...post up more...you've really got it! 
 
best wishes 
 
mishmish

Written by tartqueen (21 comments posted) 29th June 2006
Was browsing and just found this. Really like the last two lines.

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