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A Million Ways I Love You |
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By bloodange77
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26 June 2006 |
I wrote this for my love. i found one yes. A million ways I love you, I love you more than the ocean has waves. I love you more than the sun is hot. I love you more than I need oxygen to breathe. I love you a million ways. But the best way to tell you is to, just give you a sweet short simple kiss. |
i like my work actually
Written by bloodange77 (38 comments posted) 26th June 2006 | | i love this peice. i found the perfect one and now love shall pour from my heart for him. i've written more but. . . i cannot write them in cuz well i don't know but enjoy the further work i shall write. |
Written by brook_rivers (484 comments posted) 26th June 2006 | Reminds me of elizabeth barrett brownings poem, which was used in a nice comtemporary version by julia stiles in 10 things i hate about you - the movie based on the taming of the shrew.
BR | Great writing
Written by Leo (573 comments posted) 26th June 2006 | in just 57 words you've compressed a huge amount of feeling for this special person.
sometimes articulating how strongly you feel about someone or something is incredibly difficult and frustrating, like trying to nail jelly to a wall, but you've done a fantastic job here!.
well done, great stuff | Lovely in its Simplicity
Written by mishmish (389 comments posted) 26th June 2006 | I really liked this poem.
A huge love, immense in the initial descriptions, encapsulated and narrowed down to 'just a kiss'.
Wonderful writing...
best wishes
mishmish | thanks to all
Written by bloodange77 (38 comments posted) 26th June 2006 | | thank you all for such lovely reviews. |
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