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Poetry
Maps
By ailbhe
27 April 2005
Maps
Gently, possessively, he maps the landscape of my body,
the hills and dells of the island of me,
in a space that could only be his.
Now, I am no man's colony, I
consider myself daily
and find myself headstrong and free.
But tonight I desire to be possessed
and with a kiss, ownership is sealed.
 .
If I am to be mapped land
I would like to be
the Here be Dragons of your globe;
the wild grass at the centre of our housing estate,
where the swings used to be;
the Tallaght of burnt out cars;
the uncharted madlands behind shopping centres;
the place at the back of my school where girls smoked furtively,
writing in the air their refusal to be tamed
with every defiant, smoldering smoke ring...

 .
Places change people.
He is a different creature
in this narrow creaking bed
to that daytime cartographer,
brows knitted,
vertical,
dressed.
Gently, possessively, he maps the landscape of my body,
and I will leave my mark on him
as he writes his placenames upon me.

Reviews

Written by luvccritters2 (5 comments posted) 11th May 2005
liked the use of imagery in this poem, although some of the wiritng in the imagery part I didn't capture. Overall pretty good
*clap*
Written by gutterkitty (362 comments posted) 4th July 2006
I found this in the "Work Awaiting Review" section. The ideas are lovely, and some of the language is very orginal- "brows knitted, vertical, dressed." Wonderful :)

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