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The Eternal Entertainer
By mishmish
26 June 2006
This poem was inspired by grandmother. She was a singer before the Second World War in London, and although she performed mostly in vaudeville, her voice was likened to that of Deana Durbin (if any of you know who she was!) and was truly magnificient.

She loved to sing and entertain, and so, although sad, it was somewhat fitting that she died while singing to the rest of the patients in the ward in the hospital she'd been admitted to after suffering a heart attack.

Somewhere in the realms
Of my mind
Is memory
Sweet memory
Days of enchanted bliss
I remember…

So true it was then,
Be it real now

So real, my darling is
Never gone
Sitting on the bed
She unveiled her trinkets
In a box of wonders

I was awed then
As I am now

I can hear her say
“Would you like this dear?”
I would answer “Yes”
Joyful enthusiasm
Drenched my voice

I would smile
She would too

Oh glorious, eternal smile
That never fades
Expand to a secret earth
Wonderful and new

And then the song

Her voice, once sound so shrill
Still does now

I close my eyes
Isolate myself
From the monotony of life

And hear her voice.

Reviews
The Eternal Entertainer
Written by Josie (2722 comments posted) 26th June 2006
This is a lovely, simple poem, which expresses your love for your grandma. I am sure she would be pleased that you remembered her in such a lovely way. But you are writing poetry, and perhaps one day your children and grandchildren will remember you also as the eternal entertainer.
Memories..
Written by Leo (573 comments posted) 26th June 2006
In this piece you've allowed us inside your head for a few short moments.. and if we close our eyes it feels like we are there with you... 
 
a very touching piece of writing 
 
Thank you
Eternal Entertainer
Written by Buchan (42 comments posted) 26th June 2006
A beautiful poem and a wonderful memory of a careing and sweet lady. The memories and love lasts. The loved ones go in the physical always they remain in our hearts. 
I loved the flow of the poem and the honest feel that was fresh from the soul in your words. Excellent and a read that I really enjoyed. 
Yes I remember Deana Durbin.I had a girl friend who sang just like her ..We were both sixteen...She eventually joined the cast of 'My Fair Lady" and toured America...No it wasn't Julie Andrews(wish it had been ) 
Thank you for a very good poem that brought back some memories for me...even although I was very young LOL Happy writing. 
Thank you all
Written by mishmish (389 comments posted) 27th June 2006
Thanks for your lovely comments... 
 
Thanks Josie, I'd like to think what I wrote was entertaining, though I know I'll never have the qualities my Gran possessed, she was quite unique. 
 
Thanks leo, that was the effect I was hoping for... 
 
Thanks buchan, great to know you know who Deana Durbin was! 
 
best wishes 
 
mishmish

Written by brook_rivers (484 comments posted) 27th June 2006
another excellent poem, and really heartfelt. well done mishmash! 
 
brook
The Eternal Entertainer
Written by lordspudz (10 comments posted) 28th June 2006
What more can be said that hasn't been mentioned in the previous posts? 
Very good, very personal, a pleaseure to read and experience your memories.
Hearing a voice
Written by ellyb39 (79 comments posted) 28th June 2006
WEll Mish Mash, I did enjoy this, I can really hear the sound of her voice as you obviously can and the simple repetition of the word emphasises this. It is clear, direct and very effective. elly

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