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By bobbybonce
27 June 2006

In the spirit of l'oreal



she told me out of the blue that i wasnt good enough

that she deserved more

she had a read it in a magazine.



At first i didnt believe her

but then she showed me the article

and it turned out she was right.



She left that evening and i never saw her again

at night sometimes i imagine i can hear her crying

but its just the rain.

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Written by Leo (573 comments posted) 28th June 2006
Loved it.. 
 
The introduction allows this piece to be read perfectly 
 
look forward to more..

Written by bobbybonce (7 comments posted) 30th June 2006
Thanks Leo, 
 
I am quite happy with this peice. 
 
The subject matter refers to a poisen that infects our culture. 
 
cheers
Something better
Written by mishmish (389 comments posted) 1st July 2006
You've captured our obsession with the media and the perfection that is so often displayed in images. 
 
Good stuff...well done 
 
best wishes 
 
mishmish

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