READING ROOM
Great Writing - Home
Read and review others' work
Articles on writing
Advice from the community
COMMUNITY
Talk to others in the forums
Events and Competitions
GW News
ABOUT GREAT WRITING
All About Us
Contact Us
WORK AWAITING REVIEW
GW IS...
Great Writing creative writing community is designed to prompt ideas and provide inspiration and motivation within aspiring and amateur authors. Whatever your topic; from love poetry to Doctor Who or Harry Potter fan fiction, Great Writing's online writing group is where you can make new friends and improve your creative writing.
WHO'S ONLINE
We have 1483 guests online and 5 members online
Poetry
If I. . .
By bloodange77
28 June 2006
I wrote this when I was alone.


If I said I loved you would you believe me?
If I asked the world to stop spinning do you think it would?
If I covered the moon would you forgive me?
If I blew out the sun would you banish me?
If I yelled at you would you cry for my soul?
If I crept behind a mountain would you come find me?
If I broke my own heart would you mend it?
If I questioned if you loved me would you say yes?

Reviews

Written by Goddess (124 comments posted) 29th April 2007
'Awww...' I think that describes this poem very nicely! 
 
The words are perfect, the last line was adorable. 'If' is what everyone seems to be asking nowadays!  
 
I'm very impressed 'if' I may say so myself!! 
 
 
Goddess

   Only registered users can rate and write comments.
   Please login or register.

Powered by AkoComment 2.0!

 Previous item   Next item