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Poetry
The Dance
By bloodange77
28 June 2006
A lovely thing that happened to me a while ago. That is how i explain this event.

As we danced,
the world faded away.
He spoke,
I answered.
I spoke,
he answered.
It was as if love,
had happened to me.
My world had no troubles,
they had all disappated.
But the problem was,
it was only a dance.

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that magic moment
Written by Leo (573 comments posted) 28th June 2006
Another personal moment captured for all time. 
 
Thanks

Written by Hope_G_Harcourt (4 comments posted) 13th February 2007
This was amazing...so short yet so raw and human. I've been in this position myself, where you are ecstatic, yet it's only a dance, or it's only a scene of a play.  
Well done my friend. 
-Hope Harcourt

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