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Poetry
The wood for the trees
By ailbhe
27 April 2005
You had not looked
at that birch for years. Suddenly
betrayed, you took shears and
went at her.
With every thrust of blade
she would arch, shiver. Leaves
whispered prayers
or pleas.
.
Her sap tasted of some secret pleasure.
That of the apostle
erecting his own execution:
bent bough's long moan
following sob
of silver coins in cloth,
noose's embrace recalling
one sweet rebellious kiss
it is not. Who are you
to know such things? After,
you could not look at her.

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Written by spiderbaby49 (137 comments posted) 20th May 2005
If this is metaphor I'm not sure what for. Only know that is has a haunting beauty. 
 
spidey

Written by kellyjelly (5 comments posted) 10th April 2008
This is incredible. 
I love the enjambement that you use to keep the structure and rhythm... it's really moving :):)

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