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Poetry
Love
By bloodange77
28 June 2006
i like this one. it's old and i still think some of my work needs work, but others don't so i posted it.


To me there are,
three kinds of love.
True love is the,
first and most important.
True love is when,
you know you love and will forever.
Family love is the,
second and most true.
You and your true love,
have children and that is true love itself.
Last but not least,
is first love.
Your first real love,
the one you gave your first kiss.
It cut's a little deeper,
when you loose your first love.

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keep em coming
Written by Leo (573 comments posted) 28th June 2006
I cried my eyes out when my first love came me the old heave ho... will never forget it... 
 
Scarred for life!
so true
Written by pure_heartofmine (7 comments posted) 7th July 2006
its so true. especially your first love. it cuts deeper and is harder to leave behind despite the fact that it hurts you.
amazing
Written by charlotte (1 comments posted) 8th July 2006
i must agree with the first love, it really does hurt! this is amazing and so true

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