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Morning Cumquats
By patterjack
28 June 2006
Morning cumquats .

After a year unfruited , the tiny tree
droops with its new year’s burden ;
through the dark green leathery leaves
the fruit glows golden like the fabled eggs
of the compliant geese of children's age old tales .
The early mist seems lit up by their glow
and when the sun breaks through the morning damp
the fruits like misshaped suns lie nestled there.

They are a second sunrise for the heart.

Reviews
Wow!
Written by tartqueen (21 comments posted) 28th June 2006
Really liked this!
A taste of the exotic
Written by Leo (573 comments posted) 28th June 2006
A pleasure to read, and read aloud
A beautiful scene
Written by mishmish (389 comments posted) 1st July 2006
I loved this poem, it's so laden (excuse the pun) with great description I can actually 'see' the fruits in the garden. 
 
And the last line was just perfect! 
 
Wonderful... 
 
best wishes 
 
mishmish

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