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By patterjack
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28 June 2006 |
Morning cumquats .
After a year unfruited , the tiny tree
droops with its new year’s burden ;
through the dark green leathery leaves
the fruit glows golden like the fabled eggs
of the compliant geese of children's age old tales .
The early mist seems lit up by their glow
and when the sun breaks through the morning damp
the fruits like misshaped suns lie nestled there.
They are a second sunrise for the heart. |
Wow! Written by tartqueen (21 comments posted) 28th June 2006 | | Really liked this! | A taste of the exotic Written by Leo (573 comments posted) 28th June 2006 | | A pleasure to read, and read aloud | A beautiful scene Written by mishmish (389 comments posted) 1st July 2006 | I loved this poem, it's so laden (excuse the pun) with great description I can actually 'see' the fruits in the garden. And the last line was just perfect! Wonderful... best wishes mishmish |
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